I was wondering when you're going to update?

Weird but cool. Next chapter?

Den.

I love this series, can wait to finish reading it! Please finish it!

Although I'm only on the first chapter, because I must leave for school, I can already say that this is wonderfully written. The beginning grabs the reader's interest, which is definately a plus, and the detail and imagery allows the reader to see just what the characters are seeing. I don't normally read Sci-Fi, but I think this caught my attention because I'm doing an essay on futuristic society in my English class...anyway. Yeah, good job, and I'll review again when I finish this.

Fuck Luc, Malachite is way better!

Damn the cliffy, and update...

lots of focus on that medication, makes me dread it. hm, can i just venture a guess and say that the medication the theif was after? just a question. (OH, and in reference to the NIN question you asked earlier and kinda ignored accidentally: it's not as scary as you think, that one song is kinda funny when you think about it ^_^, but the others are nice-ish)

Peace and Chicken Grease

interesting start, and a smart-ass robot, sounds like something I would add ^_^. ok, just a couple of spelling mistakes, but that's probably just the speed of your typing (considering the mistakes that were made had letters next to em that made more sense). Not a bad start, but what was message 7? or is that in the next chapter?

Peace and Chicken Grease

Teh Sweet!

You know what I just noticed... all of your chapter titles start with M. Is it for Malachite? :)

Wow! thats creepy!post soon!

Teh nice~A must put on my fav authers/ Story list!

Great storyline! Can't wait for more!

Good story! I've only read the first chapter, but I'm intrigued. Keep up the good work, I'll keep an eye on this story.

As usual another great chapter!

Keep writing,~Smoke Angel~