Aw, so sweet and incredibly sad. it kind of reminds me of The Notebook. You are a really talented writer\. Keep it up.

This was BEAUTIFUL and I can't begin to put enough emphasis on BEAUTIFUL. This piece really struck a nerve with me for alot of reasons, some not important enough to mention. I work with elderly folks everyday and just to hear these words from that point of view gives me a different feeling for my job now. You have no idea how much it opened my eyes to something I already knew in my heart but can never remember with my head. I can't even begin to tell you what this piece means to me and I want to thank you for the opportunity to be able to read such fantastic work...and I truly mean that with the utmost sincerity. Ravens Cross

Well. this one almost made me cry. It is beautiful. It really does tell the story of a long life and marriage. You feel it beautifully for someone who has not experienced it. Love it. Geemom

I like it, I'm an angst writer myself so I really love this. The last line rocked! And made it that much more powerful! Nice writing. Keep it up!

though it's sad, it's always good to hear somethin without a happy ending...i really liked itkeep writing :)