Beautifully descriptive!^_^ I love this alot!

i really like it! (i'm a bit biased since i LOVE anything to do w/rain...especially dancing in the rain...) i didn't think the beat was off at all either! so keep on writing!

~hellokittychic~

The imagery you create in this song is really good! I especially like how you describe things in order of rain, gales, lightening, then thunder. The last line was really good too. I don't really have any criticisms to give you! Blessed Be!