Reviews for Puss In Boots - FictionPress.com

Luna October Wolf 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuselol, awesome story, I love the ending with the peasants! Excellent!
Ann Gry 2006-01-06 ch 1,	abusePleasant to read, though there was one spot where too many commas were used: "The cat, was, naturally, distraught at this, so quickly he said to his master..." The removal of one or two commas would clear it up nicely. That would be my only notice. I would also like to thank you for the review on my story "Cup of Hate." I agree that the present tense isn't all that easy to swallow. Actually I have plans of changing it to past tense, but I've been stalling. It's going to be tedious to fix.
chitoryu12 2005-07-21 ch 1,	abuseActually, in the PS2 version of San Andreas, you can only access the minigame via a cheating device. I've checked it for myself. As long as the people that play it are mature enough not to take the game seriously and think that killing and crime is fun because of it. Age has nothing to do with it, just your mind and how it's effected. As for the story, slightly funny, but I may get the jokes more if I read the real story that you're parodying.
Brooke ORiley 2005-01-15 ch 1,	abusegood times. most of that does sound quite familiar (though i'd certainly forgotten the actual story in light of shrek 2 nowadays) except, of course, for the threats of dying horrible, slow, terrifying deaths. nice work!