o nice

Spur of the moment? that's a very good spur! X3 Very nice... and sweet... You have a very nice writing style.

not what I expected, but, nonetheless, wow. seeing as how this was a tragedy, I read through it slowly, and I'm glad because the ending really hit me harder then it would've if I skimmed. I must admit, that was rather short, but very heart-wrenching as you said. very good job, kudos.

~Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain.

Good! You should add more! If you wouldn't mind returning the review, i'd be much ablidged. But post more for this!_-Yin

I just sped through this...I feel guilty that I wasn't able to give it the time it deserves...but I got the general gist of it, and it's really good, and heart wrenching, as you said. It wasn't what I expected, I thought that she was going to kill the man that she loved...but instead she killed herself. I know what it feels like to, that void inside of you that feels like it will never be filled with love. Loneliness is one of the worst things in the world, if not the worst. Great job, and keep the thought provoking pieces coming!!

very heart wrenching indeed! *waterfall tears* well, i did love as i always love your updates!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Oh, God! Way to make me cry! That was so Romeo and Juliet... ah so sad! :'( Well-written and all, I love the poetry stuff between it, it's just so... sad! :'(

I really don't understand this at all. I mean, I understand that she killed herself, but why?