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| ree.4.jasp. 2008-09-19 ch 1, | you are seriously awesome, but most of these are sad. |
| xanthofile 2005-07-29 ch 1, | it's only fair that after all the praise you gave to me that i be able to dole out some of my own. and so...this was truly bittersweet. painfully beautiful, with an equally bittersweet ending! *sad smile* seriously under-reviewed, that's all else i can say! |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-01-23 ch 1, | I know this is my storie and all but I have to say out of all my stories I posted this is my favorite. This one holds more passion and more feeling then all my other ones. It's one boy(man what ever) showing his feelings. He felt cheated and betrayed. Used and abused by the one person who made his life worth living. "What do you do when the only one who could make you stop cryinng is the one who made you cry?" A quote one of my favorites. It fits this storie very well. I had to have some type of happy ending though it was'nt all that happy. He will never truly get over his first love because your first love is the only one you give all your heart to. Once their gone they take a piece with them. Everyone else just gets whats there. I'm glad though that I had him find somone else. Someone who made him feel just as special. Someone who understood that they would never have his full heart. If you could understand that and still love the person then that is true love. The last little paragraph was my favorite because it brang closure to his scaring feelings. That love would always leave a scar on his heart but he dosn't care. He relized love could be found elsewhere. ^^ Well anyways that was my little bable about my storie I hope everyone else enjoys. |
| tears that have fallen 2005-01-13 ch 1, | SO...beautiful. I'm speechless of how good it was. I love it. so much...uhh i don't know how to put it in words. It was the best. THank you so much for writing such a thing and posting it so many people could read it. Thank you. I really enjoed it. |