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| Rebekah the Scribe 2005-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseAnother great poem. I like your almost mythic style of writing, it reminds me of J.R.R Tolkien; Alfred, Lord Tennyson, and vaguely of Robert Frost. I only noticed one spelling error and that was your usage of the word 'heals' in this line: "I hear the lonely patter/Of heals upon the paths" I believe you meant this word: heels. ^_^ But that's quite alright...typos yes? lol. No more suggestions can I see fit to make. Nicely written! ~CR |