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| Rocky G 2005-01-11 ch 1,   | Excellent poem, opens up your imagination just reading it. Rocky |
| IsisAvenger 2005-01-04 ch 1, | Writing a short poem is almost like writing a complete novel. You have to introduce your character, tell his/her/its story, then end it. It's like a novel because its extremely hard to do & I don't particularly think you've succeeded here. You have beautiful words, but the ending just isn't there... |