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| DarkPegasiKnight 2005-04-24 ch 1,   | The only thing I find wrong about this poem is that some lines are too short. Everything else is fine. As for a title, how about Noticing the Details, or Using the Senses? (I know they both stink but hey, it's an idea ^_~) |
| Keith Andrew 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Thats lovely. And so true as well. Excellent-Keith Andrew |
| Aslan Israel 2005-01-07 ch 1, | Wonderful imagery. great job. |
| IsisAvenger 2005-01-04 ch 1, | Well done. I love the way this is written. |