Simple and nice

It conveys the emotion as if you didn't like that friend of yours to leave at all.

Thanks:)

hi! this is so sweet of you...i liked the other one you started too, remember the one i suggested? i forget what it's about now...'_ Anyway, are you gonna post it? lovie, earthie

that's really good...i like how you captured the emotion of loneliness so well in a few short lines...really well written...keep it up! yinyang-shadow