Lovely rhyme.

aww..this is so gorgeaous...i love this! great job!

I love this one! it's wicked awsome!"Alas, during every stormy wind,

Surpasses a phoenix to adorn,

And within tender hands,

A virgin hope will be reborn"I loved that part. Keep it up.

This is such a beautiful poem, excellent descriptions, flow and unique story. Keep up the excellent work!

Very original. Since it reflects stark reality it is indeed worthy of being a valiant knight's lullaby, the modern day sleeping pill!

REally Good!