haunting and very absorbing. awesome work, this really touched me!

...thid was a very heartfelt tribute, may god have mercy on theit soul. This was a great collection of haikus.-ADD

God bless the tsunami victims. And may those struggling form the aftermath of the disaster be able to rebuild their lives again, although they may never be whole ever again. Extremely poignant haiku, great work.

*sniffles* so beautiful...i made a tribute poem to the tsunami victims too but this one gives powerful feelings...it makes me feel guilty and empty at the same time...

This is such a sad and powerful poem-I feel like crying. But one question, are the four haiku's seperate from each other or do they flow together to form one story?

I just need to say a couple words to say how I feel. Peaceful and touching.

That's such a beautiful poem. Very touching.

i think it's very nice that u dedicated a poem to the tsunami victims. i'm originally from thailand, so it means a lot to me. thank you! -Eternal Aeris

Yes, very true. I like this poem alot. I have read a couple of tribute poems today and they just keep getting better. Great job. What a nice thing to do. I wish I'd have thought of it. Keep up the great latershinji

amen.

the mood of weariness & resigned betrayal complements the tragedy beautifully.

-lin

that was really nice of you to write this, it's really good and touching

it was great of you to write this...

Beautiful. Very very beautiful and it is now on my favourites list. You are a very good writer, I look forward to reading more of your work.

excellent

Very good. Well written, and very touching. Nice job. A moment of silence for those who died-or perhaps more...