"our love is a stillborn child" ...fantastic.

Really beautiful. I'm a bit of a rambler myself, so I love succinct, powerfully written poetry like this. You say so much in so few words.
Excellent job.

that was truly incredible and beautiful. It had so much meaning behind it. You are a brilliant poet!

it's mindblowing, and reminds me of the pictures of second hand plain wood bloodstained coffins and thin, dying amputees, that make me feel so sick. so ** powerful

This makes me think of disaster victims. It brought to mind, for me, an image I'd seen in a photo after the tsunami.Your poetry is always beautiful. This one, while short, managed to capture a peak of emotion that would be hard to grasp in any other form besides poetry.

oh wow. short and so sharp. powerful words, especially "our love is a stillborn child". simply poignant.

You speak things and pictures, not words. I see yellow hospital lights and a linoleum floor; still, crisply linened, sad sheets; aluminum bars just holding this dead weight off the floor. Regardless of the fact that these may not have been the intended images, please take the compliment as intended.

I shall read on; I wish I had discovered your works earlier.

the stillness is the light, the lack is the beauty, the death is the all embracing peace, but alive with meaning, and energy and memory. hmm, it's a thinker no doubt.

I like this one to.

Oh, you're good.

x3 Summer

Oh and by the way I am British and therefore I spell 'judgement' like that rather than 'judgment' so don't correct my spelling.

Beautiful

The use of no punctuation aren't doing anything for you hun, other than that great poem! I probably shouldn't be quite so happy about it as it is one of those depressing ones but oh well, I liked it!

You've reviewed my work as Ruby Woo...I won't be using that name any more, so check out OpiumHex...lots of new stuff :D

strong last line, muchly excellently enjoyed this