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| Poetrybay 2005-02-03 ch 1,   | nicely well written this is a nice peace of work |
| Orphans' Wail 2005-01-06 ch 1, | very enchanting pattern, nice overall style. I enjoy your writing style. |
| Ruby Woo 2005-01-04 ch 1, | Yes, I can relate to this one ! Yearning. I am gripped by the last 2 lines. Wonderful little poem :) |
| Harajuku Girl 2005-01-03 ch 1, | Provocative non? |
| Velvet Valentine 2005-01-03 ch 1, | The things everyone wonders put into a short, sweet poem.You seem to think a lot, just like me. I think you've just made my favorites list... :) |
| Princess-anna57 2005-01-03 ch 1, | This is a great poem. It's simple, but very powerful and I think poems like these are the very best! -Anna :) |