lol i like this storythe characters are true to life:) kudos

I LOVE IT! Hehe, great main character, I love him already. Heehee, can see him trying to climb the drapes so vividly in my mind... Just realized this is the first bit of your writing I've read in first person, you're good at it girl! You know how I know this is really good - it makes me wanna write! So I'm off, great job!

hehehe...you have got me THINKING! XD

Research ensues...

sound like standup charactors, i'll enjoy seeing where you go with this one, Tally

Haha looks to be fun! Ooh, for once Tally without a fantasy element! Is this possible!? I really can't wait to see what comes of this, and yay your hero's a geek! I love geeky heroes... sigh... I certainly hope you continue with this.

Okay, this is weird, but it could definitely get interesting. I really like the description of Megan. Cordy is scaring me already. Any particular reason you've got boys and girls living together?

Likey, likey. Before I go any further - this is Born Mistake on yet another pen name - I have three. Hehehe, also thanks for the "Behind Kaiti Yotsu" review - and just for info don't worry you didn't miss anything with the Sujo throwing up - you'll find out in the next two chapters. Anyways so far very interesting - its caught me that's for sure - plus would I not read a story of yours. I like the idea that your portraying college students trying to get through their lives - that should be interesting. Though I'm not in college and still have senior year in highschool to go after junior - I still love the idea. You update and I'll read and review - also whenever you have time please check out my story on this name. Thanks, c-ya.

I think that you could pull this off. It is probably risky, as you could easily fall into stereotypes, but if you avoid that you should be fine. Caricatures (well done ones) are fine by the way. (By well done I mean not overly exaggerated)Also, another problem would be maintaining the comic feel. I don't think I have ever read something comice of yours. Doesn't mean you can't do it, just maybe a genre you are less familiar with.

Reminds me of someone who is a cross between Cordy and Megan- she bursts into song at random moments and is continually ACTING crazy. Sorry that was random. :)