;_; this story is just so sad so far, i hope Seth will be ok ;_; poor guy.you have a wonderful way with words its a great story just really sad.. keep up the good work and hope you post again soon

tht is so sad!! omg...plz update!

sorry I havent read for like 4EVER...I've been SUPER busy. And thanks for ur review.

~B~

Come on, keep the chapters rolling...:)

whoo thas a good story so far ^^ you have to work on it so i can read more of it ^^

Another great chapter...plz plz plz update SOON!

hmm, interesting. does dametra trust tanner now, then? she doesn't seem to have a problem trusting him about seth, but in previous chapters, she thought that he could never be trusted. it might help if you illustrate the turn-around a little better. unless there never WAS a turn-around...

the story's definitely progressing. but i'd like to see some more confrontation between dametra and tanner, especially over the vampire, pierce. it'd be interesting if dametra chose to keep in contact with pierce, just to spite tanner. after all, i doubt he'd think twice before doing the same to her. keep up the good work, arslan!

blessed be, lily

hey! A cliffhander! What happened??

But...but...what has happened?! I need to know more!

*gasp* dude, you canNOT just leave it off there. well, you can, but it's really annoying! i hope you have an idea as to what the heck tanner means 'cause i sure don't. here's hoping the next update is soon!

blessed be, lily

Well, I have mixed feelings about this chapter COS' IT IS TOO SHORT! ARE YOU PURPOSELY STARVING ME OF THE STORY?! I MUST READ MORE!

lol...this reminds me of those lovey-dovey soapies where the two "loverbirds" can't stand each other and then..they do. CUTE! Plz do update.

wtf did TAnner just do? You don't treat a lady that way!!

uhoh...I don't know...what could this dream mean?? *reads on*

>.

OMG such a great chapter! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!

Effective detail. Me likey :)