Nice. I HATE having dreams like that though. I have no luck with guys...lol. Very nice poem. You put a lot of emotion into you're poems. It's like a quote my Language Arts Teacher told us.."No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader" I think Robert Frost said that. You follow that rule very well, in all of your writting.

you show feeling through you work; nice job!

As always, beautiful. I can't get over how much I love your style, your rythym... beautiful. Keep writing!

Wonderful poem.

Oh gosh I HATE it when that happens. It's all like WOO!and then you wake up and it's like DAMNIT! Great poem! I hope you nget that dream kiss for reals sooN! Lol.

yes, it's kinda sad when you wake up from a very beautiful dream...keep up the good work! and did you really dream 'bout that?)

o i love little lovely dreams. i had one where i told this kid 'there's a boating supply store named after you' which is easily the most romantic thing i have ever even thought of... this is a nice little poem... aww aww aww aww... it's really cute and nice... great job... however i think that the complete sentences take something away from it... usually dreams don't happen in perfect little phrases, if you know what i mean... xoxosaint genevieve

Nice i always hate when that happens. It tortures you so. Its inescapeable and for me they never come back. Oh well its a nice poem. See ya im off Aalagi-san.

wow! i had a dream just like that, and you captured ALL my emotions. this is exactly how i felt. how strange. good job.

I've had dreams like that! This is a good poem, though it's more a collection of statements. It's still very good though. (Thanks for your review, by the way.)

what an awesome dream:( haha too bad i don't get dreams like that, hope you get him:)

Yeah, let's all go sleep and have dreams like that...*sighs* Beautiful poem...

aw, thatz so cute. I hope you find the real him;)

dreams like that suck. i always wish that my real life was just a dream (it would be a very bad one) AND THAT MY DREAMS WERE REAL. oops shift got stuck. oh well

Beautiful poem, very well-written and profound.