lol watanuki haha so like him

Aw, I love this! Adorable and totally captivating. It's an amazing world you captured and totally unique. And not cliche at all. Great job!

Oh, this is a great story. At first it was all science fiction-y and then just got even better. I love the characters, and I was glad when Jacob admitted his love because finally there was someone else in love other than Aaron!

Also, I know this is a really old story, but there are a few simple mistakes, although you probably are aware...

Also, also, it was kind of weird for the main character to be named Aaron, because that's one of my brother's names. Haha. It's weird reading stories with your family's names in it. But it's still great... welp, sequel time.

Enjoyed your story! :-)

heh I can see Deekon having a issue with what Retribution asked of Aaron

well that is certainly a great way to catch a readers eye...wow you've caught me in one chapter..usually it takes more...can't wait to read more!

NO!
How can it be finished?
I was enjoying it so much too =(
In all honesty this is the BEST story I have EVER read.
How do you write so well?
Can't wait to read more of your stories =)

Boy have you got me interested.
You really know how to catch someones attention.

x

Brilliant story! I enjoyed reading it very much :)

Lol, the ending to ch10 had me burst out laughing out of know where. I swere i love this stoy. There's only a couple spelling mistakes besides that I LOVE THIS STORY.

Torn Butterfly: Hello! *Waves frantically at the author* TB here! I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVED your story! Your writing just flows so well. *Gives adoring eyes to the writer* I think I'm in love.

All: @_@

Youko: -_- IDG, your scaring the poor author. Remeber our little talk about that?

TB: Eh, eh. *Looks sheepish* Sorry. And it's TB on this website my fox-boy!

Youko: Meh. Whatever.

TB: Anyhow, ONWARD TO PART II! (

oh. What's it gonna be titled? And have you updated Run2: Escape me not.

How did you do? I say you did bloody well! This is fantastic! I'm hooked.

-does victory dance- YES! U ROCK! THANK YOU!

Wow... this is really interesting. But I didn’t like how it switched perspectives in the middle of the chapter. That was bad. I also noticed you spelled phenomenon wrong. I think you should read it over and correct some of your mistakes because their was more then one.

But like I said earlier, it’s interesting. Which makes me want to read more. So I’m gonna go do that. >.< Anyway.. Good job.

- Sanako-chan