Yaay, you updated ^^ Great chapter and I'm not confused by anything. But for a few seconds I forgot that this was a remake of Snow White but I rememeber now ^^ Update soon!!

-Prince-Arslan-

I'm not confused, but I am looking forward to reading the rest.

Kira's got a comment!

This bit here

“Whoa, whoa, whoa,” the forgotten princess broke in. “What are you talking about, runt? You mean to tell me that you do all their housework without any pay?”

is a bit of a non sequitur...maybe it should be altered a little and be put here, after this line:

He nodded slowly, then faster. “Me own mum said that when I asked her why I was named so.” The dwarf studied the girl intently, Sarah arching an eyebrow at his scrutiny. “Shall you stay with us, then? Perhaps you could be like a housekeeper?”

It just doesn't make sense...neither Dopey nor Doc has asked her to do housework yet.

Very nice, still have no clue about the code. Mystic myst be really smart.

Sorry to here about the writers block. I have it too. I would like to see that Sara and Ryan get together and live happily ever after, but I think that comes at the end.

And, sorry, I can only give one review per chappie!

Kyrria, hm? Crossing over, are you? And how blatantly obvious can you get with the 'Salazar' thing?

It's been bugging me, because Quentin's line about 'it's my work, of course it's great' sounds familiar. Am I just crackers?

It's really great, though...pobre Ryan, so embarrassed... hey, another thing: Sarah can't take her own shift off, but she can stretch out and sit up and talk rationally. Sure she needed help, mm-hm...

Ooh, gasp, a cliffhanger! It might have worked better if she weren't in a room full of people who can save her. I mean, really, if your princess is gasping and fainting in front of you, of course you'll offer aid, especially if you're Ryan.

And if she loves him, wouldn't she treasure the gift he gave her, and notice it missing?

I like the story, though, just had to point out some plotholes.

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Lily, I'm finally reading your story! Are you proud of me?

I must say I don't think I've ever had any version of Snow White besides Disney, so you have the privilege of biasing me. Rejoice. Also, I have no idea how the real story runs, so much of the dramatic irony is going to be lost. Ma'alesh.

You know I love your writing style, so no comments there-- and I can't really comment on anything else, because I have no idea how much is yours.

this is so cute! i liked Helena's sudden entrance. i think i would like to see some more cuteness between Sarah and Ryan...but not too much because too much at once will most likely ruin the scene.

-Prince-Arslan

PS-I updated my story(s).

Ooh, the drama! Sarah and Ryan are so cute together, I have to admit. I truly haven't a clue where you're going with this, which is always a good thing. Keep up the spiffy chapters!

this is very interesting... i have absolutely no idea what the code says... but update soon!-Prince-Arslanps- i've added to my story!

Ah, not a cliffhanger! You've been making a lot of references to how tan Sarah's skin is, and how pale Helena's is, so it's very intriuging... considering the normal fairy tale and all.

And codes are fun... but I think I botched yours up.

"To enter the mirror world; ?u a door no key can open; quell your fears and command; awake and let me through"

It's off, but it's as close as I plan on getting. Kudos to whoever can get it all the way.

Fabulous story, and I can't wait for you to continue. :)

I'm such a sucker for fairy tales written with a different spin on them. So, the prodigal "Snow White" gets to be a fierce warrior? Awesome. And your writing style comes across very smooth, yet sophisticated. I love it.

Oh, and thank you for reviewing my stories. I don't want to waste much space in a review for you, so I'll respond to the items you brought up on my next update. You have valid points, all of them.

Anyways, I really like this. I've never enjoyed how the classic Snow White comes across so... incapable, I suppose. Very spiffy.

Very nice! I like it so far! keep up the good work!As far as the code goes, you need to give us at least one letter! E would be the most help full! thought I am trying to decifer it.Good luck!

Catnmur

this is really good! i'm not that into fairy tales but this is a good one! i like how you're putting lots of detail and background into the characters. --prince-arslan

I like it so far! it seems like a different, unique take on Snow White that I haven't seen yet. So far it looks promising, and I'll be following this. your language seemed a little stilted at times, but i love the whole idea of the warrior queen thing. hope to see another chapter soon.