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| Ravyn Starkweather 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseLovely...Yea, it was short, but it really didn't need to be any longer. Very romantic, in a morbid sense, which, in my opinion is the best kind. Loved it to death. --Ravyn Starkweather |
| bob-chan 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abusewow...this is really sad...short but bittersweet and to the point...i like it alot! i wonder how the bride fell into teh pond though... |
| hammiluv 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's SO fucking sad |
| emerald 2006-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehell...thats...hell how? why? the poor guy! my heart's started beating hard here...love your choice of words...wow whoa |
| A.L. Deles 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseACCKK!! one word: PERFECT you've written it exquisitely..aww couldnt have done it any better.. well done :P ...golly so confusing yet so.. enough i loved it..i think i've read some of your other stuff..couldnt remember if i've reviewed or not. |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love it! |
| my dangerous angel baby 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseFinished reading something else and in the mood for romance. Loved this! Great job! =) |
| Blcknblu 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abusepowerfulmovingtouchingit is fantasticsadi think it is perfect in every wayits really awesome |
| Gina 2005-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseits like they say love lives on forever. |
| Renzie 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I liked how you dove into the climax right away. It gives a factor of likeability to this. Great job! |
| a24HourSmile 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseHunny. Jeez. IDK where you get these things from. But it's great. Keep it up, kid. lol. |
| EoSpHoRuS 2005-07-21 ch 1, | abuseYeah.. it sucks they both died... but they are together in the afterlife! *mutters about never reviewing this either* ~Meg |
| Karuli 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseum did he die too? sad... |
| fwaahh 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abusei must say, i was really swept away by the imagery and the analagy of the ice being the barrier of death made everything so much more real. beautiful. well done. |
| Scarlett Leigh 2005-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseUgh. Very creepy, but well written. |