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| thestonedfox 2005-01-21 ch 3,  | abusei loved the story! it's different from anything i've ever read.. i wished you'd continue it.. but then again, i think the ending was already perfect. |
| Crazy Biene 2005-01-20 ch 3, | abuseOMG! I think though you could have extended this and made it longer. Were u lazy? I thinks its awesome. DEfinetely one of my favourites. |
| Crazy Biene 2005-01-20 ch 2, | abuseAww.. a nurse loving a mentally disturbed person...wow. U definetley know what u are doing. |
| Crazy Biene 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! The idea of swiss chesse is very creative! |