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Rara Punk 2005-01-04 . chapter 1
I really like this verse the best "Long since have the ribbons decayed

The colors flaked away

The paper is torn, taped, torn again

My love so naive, amongst the garbage"

I just love the image you create with that part.awesome work-keep writing!
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