Feel free to write as much smut as you like you won't be the first and i'm sure definately not the last. By the way loving the story so far.

Aww Mike's so cute and I can kind of relate to him and Chester was sweet too until his friend ** it up. Oh and if your looking for spelling mistakes, environment in the first paragraph, I only noticed it because it's at the very start, normally I read over them. Looking forward to reading the rest :)

wow, you really are a linkin park fan, what with all the lyrics being by linkin park and the main characters sharing the first names of the lead singers :P nice lol you have good tast

Mike...take a joke...
Ok, one little, tiny, criticism: run-on sentences.

Those guys are so mean...arrgh...Anyway, I like it so far. It is well written enough that it makes me care about the MC..which is to say it is very well written :D

Your story made me cry...more than once. >w< (Happy crying, sad crying, laughter crying...the whole shebang. I'm so emotional sometimes lol)

I'm happy I finished it because the BRAND NEW chraging cord I got for my laptop just got destroyed because it melted...(my laptop is an over-heated dinosaur)...and I only have 20% battery power left. But HAHA forces of the universe, I finished a 32 chapter story in a few hours with limited power...*hugs the story, hugs Mike, then hugs you*

Oh aand regarding what Mike said about having to be 18 and yadda yadda, WHY DIDN'T HE JUST GO TO THE POLICE? Jesus Christ, I thought maybe he was smarter than that. xD But oh well. :P

It is such a wonderful story, you make me cry so much! i really loved it.Chester was great until he cheated on mike, i don't understand why he did that! well apart from that he is so caring and loving, hope i will find someone like him someday héhé
thank you!

i loved it!

Great story, loved the mix of songs, i even found some i'm gonna download. Great story.

Wow. I don't know what to say... It was really well written and the plot was fantastic! Thanks so much for writing it!

wow, nice how they ride off into the sunset like that. i wanna sequal.

darn, i was hoping that there'd be a hospital visit. :

i /hate/ chester

-.- I go every song hoping that "this one's blue october" but never...

you had me at hello.

lolbol, the introduction had me sympathetic, and by the second chapter this had become my favourite angst story ever, now i'm emo irrervocably it seems... i just signed up for a poetry contest.