Reviews for In the Shower - FictionPress.com

kameleon 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abusei'm a little head case, so when i take a shower, it doesn't feel safe to me. but i like how you describe the way you feel, because in reading your (very good) poem, i can imagine what it feels like not to think someone will attack me with a knife while i'm in the shower. and that's a sign of a good poem!! i also love the bluntness of it, you don't get all metaphorical, you just say what you're thinking. wonderful poem!! hugs, joy
Out-Of-Reality 2005-02-12 ch 1,	abuseNods slowly A very true poem that was written extremely well. It's interesting how this poem made me think. A very good job!
Chris Taylor 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abusesafety in a place where you can drink water and drown? laughs to self, seriously though, great imagery in this, i dont cry often, but when i do, shower is not the place (usually in bed, or while on comp ironically enough) and peoples are morons. look forward to readin more of your work (and sorry i havent checked your stuff out in a while, been busy with a LOT of stuff) Peace and Chicken Grease
lil-sun-and-moon 2005-01-05 ch 1,	abusegREAT JOB!! I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL! IT'S HARD TO CRY WHEN I'M AROUND PEOPLE CAUSE I DONT LIKE TO SEEM WEAK BUT WHEN I'M ALONE I DO. GREAT JOB AND KEEP IT UP!