fascinating...

sad, but so beautifully written.

awesome.

this is extremely enchanting. i absolutly LOVE it! keep writing.

karkalla

Cool. I like the way you write, it's more poetic than mine. I just kinda string words together. It looks like you actually put some effort into it. But I have no clue what the thingy its based on is. I'll have to look it up.

awesome work. So beautiful that I really don't know how to comment. Just keep writing.

This is beautiful. Being a dancer and familiar with the ballet, I must say that you captured so well the emotion conveyed within the story. Simply beautiful beyond words.

beautiful. for some reason this reminds me of two lovers dancing together, but then someone undesired keeps cutting in.

i envy the way you write...lol i love itkeep writing :)

...I'm amazed. So beautiful...the emotion, the words you wrought, the imagery...everything...so ethereally despairing...love it!

That was so sad! I love it. Your poems are always fun to read . . . they have much more personality and distinctive flavor than anything I will ever write, I believe. Keep it up!

That is pure beauty.

i love that ballet, it's amazing, especially the end. This poem completely captures the emotion and brings the imagery clearly to mind, well done.

I like the way this poem looked. It grows and shrinks. It adds a lot to it. Good writing

good, with a beautifully creepy sound to it, but i think it dragged on a bit too long. yeah...i really liked it tho. good job.