|Reviews for Her Hands Wrung Lilly White|
| dragonsdream13 3/28/05 . chapter 1
| catseyeview 1/29/05 . chapter 1
sad, but so beautifully written.
| Blackening the Ivy 1/21/05 . chapter 1
| Karkalla 1/20/05 . chapter 1
this is extremely enchanting. i absolutly LOVE it! keep writing.
| Trajo 1/12/05 . chapter 1
Cool. I like the way you write, it's more poetic than mine. I just kinda string words together. It looks like you actually put some effort into it. But I have no clue what the thingy its based on is. I'll have to look it up.
| Miz E. Mak 1/11/05 . chapter 1
awesome work. So beautiful that I really don't know how to comment. Just keep writing.
| Deirdra Chaeli 1/10/05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. Being a dancer and familiar with the ballet, I must say that you captured so well the emotion conveyed within the story. Simply beautiful beyond words.
| Rebecca Kelsey 1/10/05 . chapter 1
beautiful. for some reason this reminds me of two lovers dancing together, but then someone undesired keeps cutting in.
| r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 1/8/05 . chapter 1
i envy the way you write...lol i love itkeep writing :)
| dusk orchid 1/8/05 . chapter 1
...I'm amazed. So beautiful...the emotion, the words you wrought, the imagery...everything...so ethereally despairing...love it!
| Koriina 1/8/05 . chapter 1
That was so sad! I love it. Your poems are always fun to read . . . they have much more personality and distinctive flavor than anything I will ever write, I believe. Keep it up!
| logical-unreason 1/7/05 . chapter 1
That is pure beauty.
| myno 1/7/05 . chapter 1
i love that ballet, it's amazing, especially the end. This poem completely captures the emotion and brings the imagery clearly to mind, well done.
| erasedcrap 1/6/05 . chapter 1
I like the way this poem looked. It grows and shrinks. It adds a lot to it. Good writing
| bloodknives crookedrainbows 1/6/05 . chapter 1
good, with a beautifully creepy sound to it, but i think it dragged on a bit too long. yeah...i really liked it tho. good job.