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| simpleplan13 2005-01-12 ch 1,   | very nice... beautiful descriptions.. thanks for your review.. it was very sweet & ill try to feel better! |
| Locomotive Breath 2005-01-06 ch 1, | Wow, as i andie and i said, j-poo this poem is amazing. your vocabulary and imagry never cease to amaze me. The first two lines really draw you in, and the end; oh god i love the ending. Not only is it a great way to rap up the poem, but it's just beautiful. soory i'm not good at reviews. i'll leave it at: this is going on my favorites! |
| DrammaQueen 2005-01-06 ch 1, | You...that was...WOW!! i love it. You read one of my poems a while ago, and yes thank you for asking if i was well, I'm fine and couldn't be better. I write for depressional puroposess and i'm not anywhere near depressed. Thank you for worring, you have a beautiful soul for writting and i can feel that you are a good person in intrest(though that might sound strange i mean it in the best way possible) |
| Sleeptime for Sun 2005-01-05 ch 1, | As always... amazing. Your poems are simply beautiful... I can't even go into words, I'm in awe. Stunning. Absolutely stunning. |
| Galadh Niniel 2005-01-05 ch 1, | Wow. This is absolutely awesome. Your imagery is amazing. I just love the way you intertwine (as you yourself say in your poem) the human dimension and nature, the ease with which you interweve abstracts and concretes, creating a dense, rich, beautiful and though-provoking tapestry of metaphors. The word choice is also very intense, which makes for a strong emotional impact. Emotion and intellect perfectly combined. Great piece. |
| Chandra Chhaya 2005-01-05 ch 1, | Great description and imagery!The poem showed several emotions mixed together in a nice flow of words. ~InspiredxIllusions~ p.s. review some of my poetry and stories as well! |