   Perilous Escapist 2005-01-23 . chapter 1"Time and time I turn my back but/Time and time I look again"
I REALLY love and connect with these lines.
It appears that you'll never cease to amaze me with your fantastic poetry! You're very talented, and that's a rarity, particularly when it comes to me because I'm very picky about poetry. One thing I'm noticing, though, is that you have a tendency to swear in your writing. I don't necessarily thing that's a bad thing, but it almost takes away from the ethereal quality of your words. You don't have to change it, that's just my opinion.
Another great piece - I'm very impressed. Keep writing.:) |
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