Interesting story so far! Update soon! :-)

I really like this story and would like to read more. Please please update.

wow intense i cant believe that happened.will Kyle finally realise he loves Lauren?wonder what he does when he wakes up and sees that shes gone

WHAT?! Its been forever since you've updated! How dare u leave us at such a crucial moment?!

sad..was that her first time? heh. good story, though. update soon.

~S.Buh Bai.

Renee IS a stupid **. That was rude of Kyle. I argee with virgo-valentina. I have a bad feeling about this... She shouldn't have gone to his house... KYLE THE BASTARD MUST DIE! *revs up chainsaw of doom & chases Kyle* Good chapter! Update soon!

YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO PLAY PEOPLE KYLE! THEY'RE NOT GAMES **!! Dude, depending on where you live, that sexually active relationship's illegal! Why's he taking his tutor to a movie? WOULD HE STOP USING THE WORD CUTE!? FINALLY HECALLS HIMSELF WHAT HE IS! So the diversion didn't work, this is BAD, VERY BAD! At least Lauren tried to prevent Kyle from seein' Renee cheatin' on him. Good chapter!

Kyle's startin' to scare me... *gets knife to prepare to cut off Kyle's creepy finger* Talk about anti-climatic with ze ticklin'! FREAKY FREAKY FREAK! *starts to hit Kyle on head with rollin' pin* HEY KYLE, FOCUS ON THE CALCULUS! YOU ARE TERRIBLY SICK-MINDED CREEP KYLE!! God chapter! Nice job swicthing the POV around!

Maybe those dreams mean that Lauren's hormones took over her brain. My hormones tried to do that once, though it was only for one dream. What's wrong with helpi' a dude with calculus? Isn't Envy a sin too? I'm not Catholic, but it looks like she's goin' to have a reservation at Hell Hotels if she keeps it up. Maybe Lauren's dream WAS clairvoent! Another good chapter!

Lauren, your question on sleep is a good one. I can feel with Lauren about the never feelin' beautiful stuff. But who wants to be beautiful in a shallow society? I've never had a boyfriend and everybody else seems to be hooked up but me. i'm tryin' to be a writer too! Speakin' of which, I've got more stories to be read, could you read them please? I CAN RELATE TO LAUREN SO WELL! I'VE NEVER BEEN ASKED OUT! *bawls* Isn't Lust a sin? Don't you mean 5th period? YOU HAVE A CRUSH LAUREN, THAT'S WHY!! This "she" is the class prosititute right? Freaky dream! Nice story, definatly a nice thing to read once you finish Love?Never! Keep up the good job!

It's so beautiful and sad at the same time. Kyle is a jerk in this part of the story but I think he likes her more then she realizes.. good job though.

OMG! why would Lauren let herself dot that? i feel so sorry for her, i really do! was he her first? it'd be sad if he was...and he was having sex with her...not making love. Making love is when BOTH people love each other. Kyle didn't love Lauren, yet anywayz i think, and he did it with her...really sad for lauren. but its also a good story..i hope u continue, which i know u will

Wow this story really surprised me, maybe because it seems like everything happens so fast. How Lauren could fall in love so fast with Kyle isn't clear to and Kyle seems like he is in denial about her. Good work there's lots of potential w/this story!

Sorry 4got to say something. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE AD SON!

God!! Kyle is such a jerk!! he just used her like she was a piece of meat to sate his stupid lust. What a bastard!! She was his pal he said. what an arse!! I hope u add osoon!! This is the 1st time I read this striy its great!!