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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-13 ch 1,  | abusewow, the 3rd verse is by far the best! nice poem , something i think a lot of people think about but it's cool how you've managed to put down some of your thought on it in this poem, bravo x weasel within x |
| bread-thief 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abusei love the 5 and 6 lines. those two are great. |
| Angel Underneath 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseFirstly i admire ANYONE that can rhyme and add meaning that it's not just some coincidental poem of rhymes. I don't know where to begin, i really like this. As i've said before truly wonderful |
| LauraKM 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseDeep, could have done with somthing more for my taste, but it's very good as it stands. |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI believe there are/is other life out there. I wonder... Great ponderings!Post some more poems! |
| Mon Amour 2005-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was georgeous! It was very cool, and refreshing to read. good job, Nicely writen!~aquarius piscies~ |
| Joey7691 2005-02-25 ch 1, | abuseSeems unfinished to me. I dunno why. |
| Thyrt 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseyay! lol i liked it:D..my older brothers use to be really into things like star wars and such..so of course something to do with space is cool! |
| LilyDarkwater 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abusebon perfect! Its lovely in a looking at life through the wrong yet right side of the microscope kind of way. Love it, keep up the good work~the lynster |
| MoriSenpai 2005-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the duality you're using here. It's like you're saying that we are everything, and yet we are nothing. (Huzzah for my oversimplification!) |
| Charisma101 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abusehey i like it, short poems make it easier to enjoy quicker:P lol thanks for reviewing. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. we seem so small in the scheme of things. it's a bit frightening. good job! |
| Sang Yu Nung 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHey thanks so much for the review! Sorry it takes me forever to get back to people but I always do in the end. I thought this was very simple, but meaningful at the same time. The poignant and it was very thought provoking! Great work, please *write on*. ^.^ |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusenice rhyming and descriptions |
| EmeraldEyes89 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuse*claps hands* I Like it! It's really awesome! You should update soon! I like your poetry! ~Amanda |