Oh My God. I just love the way you put this out. It was absolutely brilliant and fantastic. Really. OMG. I just didn't think it would end this way and I love ur last line

I knew I had just lost out in Fate’s cruel game.

Loved it! ^_^

my god...that was amazin...im readin it and im like no...alec wot are doin STOP alec!then at the end i felt so bad for him in a way its his fault but now hes gotta live wit that the rest of his life!damn i gotta read the rest of your storys il be bk dont worry!

xxkisses

wow...a short story has never ever made me cry but i gotta tell you this did it. you are such an amazing writer. that is one of the finest works i have ever read. it's so real and filled with such emotion...i absolutely loved it. please review mine and perhaps we can get some good conversation going.