Reviews for Another Gay Marriage Essay

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someone 2007-11-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseUm sorry but not a good argument. I mean eyes? Come on everyone has eyes, a blue eyed person can marry a blue eyed person,no duh. Not saying that I'm against gay marriage it's just in my opinion this story is lacking symbolism and what's symbolising what could be easily argued(as I did earlier and in other ways as if it's just propaganda that bars gay marriage, which it's not), meaning everything about this doesn't feel right to me or maybe it sounds right, then again I haven't read that many comparisons to "real world situations that show how gay marriage is just as or should be just as like/the same in having rights(aka marriage not civil unions). So it's not you it's your example I guess.
FoxTail13 2007-03-26 ch 1,	abuseI for one think this is really clever. Loved the way you talked about gay marraige in this way. Props to you for the interesting writing style.
~~~ 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's a creative but vague metaphor. The only thing is that I kind of agree with some of the other reviewers;You say that "Keith equals:varying ideas on the “Truth”: God, other gods, philosophy, etc."And then you go on to say "Keith was a lazy child-neglecting bastard" which I don't agree with. Even if it is a metaphor and the kids are supposed to represent adults. I think you should take that part off, because even though I'm not against gay marriage or anything, I believe in God and I did feel a little offended when I read that part.
arkayz bible 2005-12-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is really good. very imaginative. very good arguments.
ValkyrieRavenfeather 2005-10-23 ch 1,	abuseXD. This was hilarious, as well as true. I kill conservative121 with a hammer. As for John Stein and Mr Flames, shut up. I usually like you, Flames, but this was brilliant. No Trust, have I ever told you that you are INCREDIBLY weird? (I think s/he reviewed one of my essays...and it also made no sense...) Again, brilliant! Keep writing! Peace out!
Faile1 2005-08-29 ch 1,	abuseI really liked your essay and the style in which you presented it. Although, in response to accusations made by other reviewers, you did not say anything that was completely unheard of (which is hard with this subject), you summed up the views in a very nice way. I think the simplicity which you gave it really does take out all of the religious zealot crap. There are a few reviews which I wanted to make a comment on. "your a sick twisted individual using children to rationalize gay marriage." -- Just another conservative twisting the issue. Brilliantly avoiding the issue while using improper grammar all at the same time. Fasinating. "Good God. Are you an obsessive?" -- I really don't get how you writing an essay about your views counts as obsessive. Although someone cannot be "an obsessive", so this review just left so many unanswered questions. "The only thing odd about this, is that I feel certain you've read the mind-numbing number of other gay rights essays, and yet you then write your own... intriguing." -- Wow, is it intriguing now to write about a subject already written about? I think we need to distribute some textbooks. Obviously the whole history thing was skipped.
TechnicolorPants 2005-07-22 ch 1,	abuseI really don't know why you even bothered to write this? There are too many negative views on gay marriage here at fictionpress, in case you didn't realize that already. I didn't like the way anything was portrayed in this essay.
The-Duke-of-Charles 2005-05-27 ch 1,	abuseMy good god! I couldn't have said it better myself! This is a perfect example of how to write a persuasivly. It's funny, original and very well written. Everyone should be forced to read this before they are allowed to say anything about same-sex marriage. Tres Bien! Well done! etc. P.S.Could I send you a play I've been working on? I'd love your thoughts on it.
Somnia 2005-05-13 ch 1,	abuseHey, cute, I liked it. To the reviwer sho reckons you chose the name bouceball cos it's sexual and you're a pervert or whatever cos of the kids: HELLO?! did u never hear of a m-e-t-p-h-o-r?! Last time I looked the kids weren't actually having sex, they were playing. Its SYMBOLIC! duh! And you're the one who decided that "bounceball" was sick...not anyone else that read it I noticed...
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-25 ch 1,	abuseYou have a talent with telling a parable of sorts. I wont say I agree or disagree with the whole gay marriage thing, Too complex of a debate to talk about in a reveiw. But i do want to congratulate your writing on it. It makes the reader think outside of the box and get into something that needs to be discussed. Congrats on that...you brave soul you... smile
Tabi Berkey 2005-04-12 ch 1,	abusethis was awesome...very original and i loved it
Adrasteia Wen 2005-03-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's like an extended metaphor in essay format...I like it!
TallemeraRane 2005-02-14 ch 1,	abuseVery creative. I'm not against gay people, but I'm not for gay marriage. Also, God isn't a "lazy child-neglecting bastard", but whatever. This is the most hypocritical review I've ever written...I like the way this was presented even though I'm not for the message. :-/..keep writing.
Eboniccinderella 2005-02-01 ch 1,	abuseIf Keith is supposed to be any God,I am not pleased that you named him a "lazy child-neglecting bastard".But at any rate,this is a very,very,very well written piece.It's original and creative.
Tiefling 2005-01-26 ch 1,	abuseWow... That was just brilliant. Seriously. Wow.

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