This is good...i like how i can get a feeling from this poem with such few words. and i have no idea if i made any sense, but i'm trying to say. I liked it alot. ^^

m...different from usual...but a good different ;)! Keep up the good work.

wow i never woulda thought of sunlight as an actual suicide for vampires... well written and well thought... 2.5 thimbs up, from ebert, me and the midget

wow, what a TOTAL RIP-OFF OF REDEEMER FROM QUEEN OF THE DAMNED! just kidding, this one was great, and different, not anything like your USUAL suicide stuff, and not as depressing either. nice work, if only you wrote like this MORE OFTEN ^_^

Peace and Chicken Grease