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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow what an interesting and quite opinionated poem. I enjoyed the way it made me think and I am sure the nun thought the same thing. The format and style is interesting. I enjoyed that much. Very mature in the word choice, and i found that refreshing... not many have a good vocab on here and I like that. My own opinion of course is different, but that is besides the point. I found this deathly charming... the hopeless despair it spread and the almost sad feeling that dead religion without relationship or faith gives off. I found it almost heartstopping and wrenchingly delicious that it seemed so dead. bravo. |
| Nothing Profound 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, interesting. I like the imagery and structure. Nice job. |
| Tenshi1 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abuseyes, nuns can be cool. and i agree = how can any one grasp the concept of one thing without ever knowing its equal and opposite? |
| PirateGrrl 2005-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this. I had to read it aloud. It's the truth and I like honesty. Thank you for posting this. Much Love, PirateGrrl |
| Takatome Ichido 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseNeat. Just, really, neat. The parallel between religion and a drug, how very similar they are, and that one can truly find God only when they are damned was so neat. Imagery, style, description, everything, it was all just really cool. -- Taka |
| Shian 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI am a Christian and agree that Religion is just a set of laws, which is why I loved it when my church reminded us that we are to live by Faith, not Religion, because Religion is just works. Good poem, btw. |
| karmakaze 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, she must be a pretty cool nun. This is a great poem, interesting comparison. |