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| Koki Enwai 2008-08-06 ch 54, | It took a while to read this, but I'm quite glad that I did. I can't believe it's the end. I really did enjoy reading it, you know. Will you be starting any new stories? All of your other ones are from '04 and I'd love to read more of your works. Nice work! - Koki |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 23, | i |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 22, | i want to know about lan too! this next chapter better be super long. otherwise i'll have to spam you if i don't get the whole story. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 21, | this might sound strange, but i'm so proud of this guy for being proud of his sexuality. proud of being straight. maybe it has to do with his confusing gender expression. damn straight. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 20, | i think, if i were in his position, i wouldn't call her either... what a crappy situation. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 19, | hm, yes, i was wondering about how he was going to react to her & his brother's sexual side of the relationship. man, ick. i wouldn't want to think of MY brother like that. haha, that reference to penises made me think of south park...xP |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 18, | tsktsk. her clothes better not be missing. hehe, maybe his friends will play a prank. or maybe they'll be nice and and fold them for her! |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-05-13 ch 17, | Guess who's back!! okay, so i don't know if you are, but hopefully you still check your email. i am here to finish up this story that i left 3 / 4 read. (and, low and behold, i am finishing my 2 year old "kiss me goodbye"). i want him to be with may. but his brother already proposed to her and she agreed. now why does this all need to be so contradictory?! hm. cloning. what a great solution. DON'T DO IT, PLEASE! |
| Allen-Oz 2005-11-17 ch 1, | Wow, this definitely captures the feeling of telling people you are engaged. I told my parents over the phone. It was quite crazy. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2005-08-02 ch 16, | her career is ruined!! :/ that was funny though. i hope you'll write more soon. i wanna know how you can tie this up (or if you're going to). i enjoy how the people he jumped into the boat with sporadically are the best friends he's ever had. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2005-08-02 ch 15, | ah! that's mean, though! oh wait, maybe you don't mean *literally* punched in the face. i was gonna say, that'd totally wreck her entire career. heh, that's awesome that his roommates still stand up for him even though he's kind become a jerk. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2005-08-02 ch 14, | that's very good that you point out the one-sidedness of the relationship. i was gonna say that, but yoúr characters have done a better job taking care of it. :D thought i'd run away without finishing this story? no way! |
| cowsgoquack 2005-05-06 ch 16, | ha..she deserved it..the goodie two shoes..great chapter. |
| cowsgoquack 2005-05-01 ch 14, | Good,Good...keep it up. |
| Killer Tofu 2005-04-27 ch 13, | I was actually a bit surprised to read that Ray was Filipino and attended SDSU. Its like 'whoa.' He is Filipino right? Or half? Ray Thomas...sounds pretty white to me. To say the least its awesome to know that someone out there is writing about something I can somewhat relate to. This story started out slow, but moving in with his roommates was definitely the catalyst to the humor that I thoroughly enjoyed. I laughed so damn hard during the Lan situations. Those were just great. Questions. What ethnicities are Lan and Josh? And how old are they? Need a bit more background on those two. Im a lil' disappointed at the short chapters since I read them so fast! But keep updating, im really looking forward to the future chapters. |