Wow...that was really impressive. I was memerized by your words. Fanastic poem...keep on going!

Again the flow is just captivates the whole essence of thought. I love how you rythm your work.

You know what I'm about to write: IT'S MAGNIFICENTLY WRITTEN! Were you angry or sad about love when you wrote this? Because if that's true, you wrote a heck of a poem out of that feeling! Oh, and I'm sorry if you felt that bad... it must be awful... ANyway, the language and rhymes were awesome, I love the Arabian clouds part, it adds a bit of exotic flare to it. It was also quite deep. Keep up the wonderful poetry!

You seem a very deep person, you have an amazing attitude to life. I have enjoyed this and like the style and focus of the writing. Please email with ur fav poems from ur list, I want to read you best! Unfortunatly I am at uni so have little free time so read them all!

Thanks

Nine Iron

beautiful & thickly layered. gives me the sense of brocades and summer nights. lovely imagery.

"Upon the silver brow of a lover, tonight,Love dies: crimson clouds do not awaken"stunning.

wonderful job!-lin

we all have dark feelings in our hearts. my feelings toward this guy that untitled is about is definitely a dark feeling. wanting forgiveness is in human nature especially if one is especially sensitive.

always and forever,Dragon Lady of Shadows (a.k.a.Chopstix or Pandora

Stunningly beautiful. Perhaps difficult to read, but I like its denseness. The imagery is wonderful, and the whole tone and atmosphere remind me of the poerty of bygone ages, Romanticism, perhaps a touch of Poe's "The Raven". Great job.