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| darkgurl92 2007-12-01 ch 6,   | o...liking...this...why dont they jux admit tat they like eachother or jealous of one n other...update soon |
| lucid lives 2007-07-06 ch 6, | ohh i like this storryy! update soon!! :) |
| Mystery 2006-07-07 ch 6, | I really like this so far! Hope you update soon. |
| Accalia holder of the light 2006-02-24 ch 6, | I really liked this chapter. Although a couple of times for got pronouns wrong for the guys. You said she instead of he. But a minor point. Mark's getting very snippy.I like it. I dunno what makes me laugh about this story. it just does. Don't worry i don't laugh in the sad bits |
| shadowed love 2006-02-20 ch 6, | *jaw drops* that jackass.. Mark should really consider going to some kind of group to learn the basics of what not to say/do to a girl... correction.. most of the male species needs to do that, but still. loving it still!! update soon please! I wanna see if he gets his comuppins or not XP |
| Accalia holder of the light 2005-12-12 ch 1, | Please please update! I beg of you! I love your story. Something about it makes me giggle |
| Accalia holder of the light 2005-09-13 ch 5, | this is a really cool story i really like keep writing please! |
| sarah_14 2005-07-30 ch 5, | this story is getting really good! plz update soon!! |
| shadowed love 2005-07-27 ch 5, | 0_0 Mark was being an jackass.. >_< yay! more stuff to read! tehe.. still lovin' it! |
| shadowed love 2005-07-06 ch 4, | *groans* why.. why must you cut it so short! *cries* more pwease! |
| alias451 2005-07-05 ch 4, | The story and plot are unique and so far the main characters seem 'real.' Defnitely continue the story. |
| Playground Love 2005-03-20 ch 3, | Meh you know what else is good? U2 Sometimes you can't make it on your own, reminds me of Iris...so confused..but thats me...umm i cannot for the life of me remember all these characters so take it slowly...um it needs to be longer maybe? |
| Playground Love 2005-03-20 ch 3, | Meh you know what else is good? U2 Sometimes you can't make it on your own, reminds me of Iris...so confused..but thats me...umm i cannot for the life of me remember all these characters so take it slowly...um it needs to be longer maybe? |
| Anon 2005-02-13 ch 2, | Ah, you must update, I only just remembered this story and found the second chapter (I got there in the end). Writing-wise you might want to add a little more description perhaps, make the story somehow 'sophisticated' as such (in other words, pad it out, show yourself off). |
| Playground Love 2005-01-21 ch 2, | Hey Hey, Goo Goo dolls, that's a cool song, though Iris is my fave! Okay I'm getting confused with all the guys... |