beautiful. i loved all of it. I especially liked "They tell me you are a chestnut and that you are tasteless and your face too red I care not to worry..." lovely.

Hey thanks for all the reviews, thought I would return the favor. This poem was well written. I loved the descriptions and imagery that you used. Just the way you said it made it all the more real. Good job, keep it up!

I love the imagery and that you used the word 'ember', that is such a pretty word and says so much.