"and the moon will make her lonely journey across that now clear sky..."

I love-love this story. Great job.

kool poem! great flow and great sense of depth. really well done =)

Sounds like a prophecy. Woot! Hope it comes true.

OH...the incredible rightness of it...I LOVE IT!

interesting... i never quite looked at the end of the world like that.i really liked. I wanna read some of your other works...so update..update..update..lol ^^

P.S. checked out your deviant page. very nice... keep it coming please.

Very nice. It was cute, and it made you think. I like what you did though, my favorite has to be " and dreams were made and shattered in a single breath " it gave me chills. Hehe. Okay, thanks for your review on my story though. I won't be updating it for a little bit but I really would love to hear your comments about my story.

Anyway, back to my review, I also like the line " And the moon will make her lonely journey.." that part was cute too--but still my favorite has to be the other one.

Good luck writing, and yes I understand how nervous you are.. I was really nervous, too. Also, you said to let you know about any slash stories--if you're up for a one-shot, I have another story--Kokoa. It's male/male slash as well.

This was a very good poem. If you like reading stories about the apocalypse, try reading through the fantasy section or the supernatural section. There are a lot of stories with this theme in those. Thanks for reading my stories, and I hope I can keep you coming back for more.

Esq

Hi! Welcome to the site. That was georgous. Its an interesting point of view, but is really a thought to consider. Nice work ~~oh for future reference, one author's note is fine... when it relates to the piece, some of the rambling might be a turn off, and the final note, you just, explore. And in these reviews, you say what you think, you dont have to review everyone, but many people like me appreciate it~~