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| burnonyou 2005-04-04 ch 12,  | abuse*claps* I love it. I love every chapter! haha. It's a great story. Keep updating for frequently though! I can never wait till the next chapter and this one took so long to come out! lol. xCryingHopex |
| cariluv 2005-03-17 ch 12, | abuseIf only more guys were like Paul... :) |
| Niinjabiscuit 2005-03-15 ch 12, | abuseYay go Paul! Lol. |
| Shahr 2005-03-14 ch 12, | abuseHmm. Cool. I gotta run. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| Megliz716 2005-03-14 ch 12, | abuseAnother great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! |
| burnonyou 2005-03-13 ch 11, | abusei was wondering when u were going to update. |
| cariluv 2005-03-08 ch 11, | abuseFinally, Tessa stands up for herself! I can't wait to read more! :) |
| pandamonkey17 2005-02-25 ch 11, | abusegreat so far! i'm enjoying it! |
| Megliz716 2005-02-20 ch 11, | abuseRay is such a jerk! He's worse than a jerk, she needs to leave him! Is Tessa finally realizing she has feelings for Paul? I hope so! I can't wait for the next update! |
| Valoria Gilden 2005-02-20 ch 11, | abuseI don't like Ray -.- He's dense. Or I think he is. I don't know if you meant to, but you've done a great job of portraying a character that's far from perfect but not bad. I'm glad Tessa finally spoke up! |
| Niinjabiscuit 2005-02-20 ch 11, | abuseYes, let her kick him... He's a complete arsehole! Sorry, but he is! Lol. |
| Shahr 2005-02-20 ch 11, | abuseOh. Poor Tessa. That Ray is not a nice husband. Why doesn't she just leave him? But then she can't, can she? *sighs* UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| Shahr 2005-02-16 ch 10, | abuseOh my. That RaY! UGH! How I hate that guy. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| Megliz716 2005-02-16 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter! I can't believe that Paul did that for Tessa! I can't wait for the next update! |
| Valoria Gilden 2005-02-16 ch 10, | abuseAh, this is wonderful. I can't wait for more. |