hm...i don't see this darkness in your everyday thoughts...

Amazing work!

Missing-Evanescence

Please, please forgive meBut I won't be home againmaybe someday you'll all goBarely conscious, you'll say to no one"Isn't something missing?"

You won't cry for my abscence, I knowYou forgot me long agoam I that unimportant?Am I so Insignificant?Isn't something missing?Isn't someone missing me?

* Even though I'd be sacrificedYou won't try for me, not nowThough I'd die to know you love meI'm all aloneIsn't someone missing me

Please, please forgive meBut I won't be home againI know I ... to yourselfI breathe deep ang cry out"Isn't something missing?"Isn't someone missing me?"

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And If I bleed, I'll bleedKnowing you won't careand if I sleep just to dream of youI'll wake without you thereIsn't something missing?Isn't something...

Even though I'd be sacrificedYou won't try for me, not nowthough I'd die to know you love meI'm all aloneIsn't something missing?Isn't someone missing me...

That was awesome! i never get tired of your work..i liked the imagery, too.

Your short narrative is haunting, deep, and very dark. I wish it were longer, so that I could get a better idea of the what you were trying to get across. Otherwise, well done.