I feel so alone again, I updated this and nobody's reviewing!

"Zoë’s cool brown-haired boyfriend, Drake!" — Because he's cool AND has brown hair! XD

Hurrah for deus ex machina escapes!

And five-year olds that can push 300 pound boxes!

*claps* great job on your first real chapter! Very long (which is a good thing), nice descriptions! Also, I used to love that song Desert Rose! lol ^^ Nicely done! Waiting for another chapter!~kchan

One of the best ways to write anything is to shed your influences. -__-() Or something like that. The summary sounds good though! Write some chappies!K-chan

Hi, Yes, you seem quite lonely, but if this is the prelude, i think you should write that at the top. How can you expect readers to come on by and review a prelude. Man, you have to put some work into it, show some chapters, show us your story and if possible, try not to be influenced too much about these animes you mentioned, because then you are better off writing fanfics. Anyways keep on working and I you get the chance, maybe you can check out my story aswell, it is also linked to spirits, but in its own special way.

Later!

I feel so lonely.