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Reviews For: Ravenna the Stunning Elven Warrior Princess Mage - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

The Abstract Dualist
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuseThis story made my day. I love it.
TomEnglish
2007-05-21
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. I loved it. Na'raqya was my favorite. :0)

-TomEnglish
Michelle Habibi
2007-04-08
ch 1,
abusethis was hilarious. i liked it. but kind of confused by the last sentence becuz it was supposed ot be a one-shot and then the last sentence talks about some boy who was destined for greatness...but i like this. bye!

-Michelle
printed-peppermint
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseOh my god. This is genius. (PASSIONATE GENIUS!)
For What Its Worth
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseYou can't leave this as a one-shot!1 Finish it, please! It's very good.
Athena-the-bold
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abuseI hate to say it but it was kind of a cliche among cliche parodies, not that I could do any better, My favorite part was Vazhuxel's apearance, it made me laugh.
Nara Merald
2006-06-06
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. I nearly burst out laughing (in a uni room full of students) at the "Timmy...I’d recognize you anywhere!" part.
msGLK
2006-05-30
ch 1,
abuse(LAUGHs) Oh my gawd ... Great story!
Fae Hines
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseYou amuse me monkey child! I Love late-night creations! *muah!*Love, S'mie
rainbow-dementia
2005-12-14
ch 1,
abuseThis story has more impact after reading How to Write a Cliche Fantasy story. More impact just meaning more hilarious. I really like how the servant with the unpronoucable name (XD) was getting so freaked out about men. Anyways, an awesome little cliche spoof.
Zefskiy
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseThis was HILARIOUS, and well-written at the same time. I've got to say, this made me smile more than anything i've read today, except for your 'How to Write a Fantasy Cliche', which I revistied again today.
End-of-forever
2005-12-06
ch 1,
abusehilarious already. can't wait to see where you go with it.
Holli-chan Stevens
2005-11-27
ch 1,
abuseLOL. A COMPLETE SUMMARY OF EVERYTHING IVE WRITTEN. XD

lol, you know, i found this while surfing the fantasy section, and read the whole thing (while spontaneously combusting into a cloud of laughter) without noticing who wrote it... and lo and behold, its rose mccann. strange, eh? Anyway, great parody. Hilarious. Totally cliche fantasy. Ciao!

--Holli!
Sarrasanne
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuseheh heh heh! fantastic, this is fantastic (sorry - but it is fantastic!) talk about humor - i'm crying! so love this!

luv Isi
swordsrock
2005-10-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh ho! This story sound oh-so-promising! In a yay-for-satire, let's-watch-as-all-the-horrible-typical-fantasy-is-mocked kind of way. How fun.
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