omg, please write more, i need to know what's going to happen, who everyone is going to end up with...

YAY! I like this one too! UPDATE! -Betsy-

"her brother was gay!Oh, no…wait, wait…her heart beat slower as she realized her hand was covering the other side of the picture"

hahahhaha that was good. and yes, the whole stephan subplot thing is kuhl; helps to counter all the extreme cliches =P

and oh yeah, this is for chapter four, since they somehow managed to prevent even anonymous multiple reviews =/

"She was ready to take action. She needed a plan to make the girls see the true Hugo-a player ready to tear their hearts out. But first, she realized it was a better plan to make Hugo see for himself how painful it is to be dumped after you think you’ve found ‘love’."

WHUT THE HECK...leona!! she's meant to be a sweet and untroubled girl, not a vindictive ** who's out for revenge, who's going to play around with some random butthole because he reminds her of another random scumball @@hmm... sounds like an excuse for your plotline =( oh no... lindsay's character has dropped into a pothole.. mebbe she and hugo really are suited to each other. hahah unless hugo ends up becoming a sweet wholesome person, who genuinely loves her.actually, that's be rather tragic and annoying. but i suppose she'll end up changing for the better =) [she better..]

okay maybe his character has improved a smidgen... well judging from the first section - he's quite cute XD but the way he talks and thinks and all is @@ blehi suppose it's cool that he wants to change, but i don't get his reasons.. why does he like her? just coz she doesnt like him, or what..?

"He vowed he wouldn’t wash that cheek for a week-at least! He smiled joyfully as he rushed off after her."he's so gonnee... and so quickly too =| does he like her in a different way? wasn't he just like, oh she's only my best friend...?

ahh i see... he's awfully possessive of her. hugo still ** me off an awful lot. don't make lindsay get with hugo T_T hugo is definitely too much of a butthole for her.. i reckon terence or whatever his name is should get with lindsay =)

hahahahahah this story totally reminds me of mengxi for some reason @@and man.. hugo paxton.. whut a butthole. he's really ** me off. leona, please don't tell me you dont think his name is hot x.x coz i'd have to fiercely disagree - his name sucks =]actually it's probably the cliches the remind of me mengxi.. haha she likes reading these kinds of stories.. ok cliches are ok but you gotta add more stuffing to it... like when i say stuffing, i mean original twists + your own personal characters, to uh.. define your story from all those other fics out there =) and OMG why didnt you tell me you had this story before?! i had to find it by mahself, and look how long it took me x.xthe whole wholesome role-model brother thing for naomi doesnt really work with his character.. you have to show that he's good =) unless you've included that to show that he hAs good in him right now, and it's gotta be unleashes when he meets the winston chick... i think it's winston =/ can't remember her first name right now..

anyway, yeah. naomi annoys me also =( now that i think about it, hugo annoys me less than naomi. and he's more interesting, in his screwed around, self-obsessed way.. i'd love to see hugo crash his porsche into a truck full of manure or something =) [hinthint] or is he like.. your perfect fantasy guy or something... oh leona ;] i guess you cant really make him crash into manure otherwise when he hugs you, you'll smell =/ and then we won't want to be sit next to you in the bus.

helo leoni!neehoz great story so far... ive read da first chapter...so long buh so interesting!neehoz...if u wna any new ideas 4 anoda story... watabout... chums? getting any ideas?? *wiggles eyebrows*heehee... wel... im gna read more afta i study hen reiew more k?bubziw8.. i jst read da bit at da bottom undr da submit reiew bit...well how 2 improve... watabout names... mebbe more unique names lyk...!xublie! nah not dat unique...howabout... um... dno...i jus lyk a whole variety of names...lool^^bubzi

Hey! Who is that woman? Is it a ex-girlfriend that Stephan had? Why does he never tell anyone about her? What is mystery about her? Hurry update soon.

i would finish off the one before if i were u ^^...leave this one for later leona...ur great at stories XD.ps. u english NERD!^^

Love this! You are doing such a great job! Keep up all the great work! *hugz*

haha... i signed in 4 once... dunno y... but im SO bored rite now... and hurry up wif pe... ugh! well, i fink u should update?? *shrugz* skools so boring nowadaiz... wah

My nick is sad? Erhm, >_> Sorry for being so anti-social, been dling Bleach scanlations like nuts this week. Only on chapter 97 and school is ** me off. Again. -.- So much damn homework! It's a nice chapter, funny and stuff, but the ending was kinda vague o_O; Family problems make me laugh, actually. My brother's a pain in the **, damn lucky people have NICE brothers and sisters. Pcha. XD Keep up the good work, laziness. o.o; I'mma work on my story too, hopefully getting some attention :P Yours Truly, - CD - or Trent...or whatever...(It's 5:52am, gah...)

u put up another story? cool! i like Hugo, the reason? no clue yet...i just do! Hope Lindsay realizes that not ALL men are jerks. Some can be decent...right? Update really really REALLY soon!

good! keep updating. i hope you update soon, you have a good story. now i gotta go to bed before my mom catches me up...

see ya

~S.Buh Bai