Ok, since you took the time to reveiw my story, and made me an offer (which I accept), I felt it was only right that I should return what I could of the favor. Meaning, a reveiw for this short, simple, yet detailed and well told story. Though I'm not one that knows much of the bible, or any religious ways, I can understand the meaning behind it. I like it alot, and I am all the more surprised that you liked my story. If you would, drop me an email at memory_of_thorns@hotmail.com since it doesn't show in your profile. I'll gladly take your offer of proof-reading my story. ^_^

this is a pretty good story. by the way, i'm SSJ Kazuma 10's partner, well my name is over at the side. anyways, i just wanted to tell you that it's an okay review but i have heard that 1 6 times now and i'm sick of it. so i guess i'll see ya l8r.

that was really good! I like the bottom the most! God Bless you

Lady Jolly