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| perdita's kiss 2006-03-12 ch 1,   | hello! your poem is beautiful, it holds itself all the way through, and the ending is very strong (and, frankly, I love strong endings and think they a a HUGE part of a good poem). It's really almost phillosophical...or however you spell it. I love "hoping these silent wishes," "your endless need to believe," "invisible tears flowing freely," and "He knows best you say and I believe." Those lines particularly struck out to me. Also, thank you SO much for the review, it made me so happy, and I'm very glad you like it. I'm kind of a spontaneous updater/writer when it comes to Dear Leaf. I wrote the first 8 chapterlettes when I posted the firt one, and last night I wrote up to twelve. that's my babble about my story =^_^= oh, and if you're looking for something beautiful to read, I highly recommend Extra-strength Peppermint Tea's work. She is a writer like no other and her skill even threatens that of Francesca Lia Block, who is my favorite all-time author since ever. hehe, lovely, and keep writing! |
| inconsequential me 2005-02-12 ch 1, | Ah, excellent poem you have here... seriously, very enjoyable and easy to relate to, because it's got complex ideas but extreme words and...ugh, just very impressive. kudos. |
| Fabian Cortez 2005-01-24 ch 1, | Very well written from start to finish; excellent flow and choice of words. KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| Harajuku Girl 2005-01-07 ch 1, | I love it. Makes me want to believe. |
| Amelia Carr 2005-01-07 ch 1, | really good writing! i'll have to read some of your other work now. |