I loved the ending! It was so... Chilling... Haha, great job! Loved it!:)

I really like this story, I can't wait to read more!

Awesome story, your short stories of Glenford Falls are pretty great, they are written greatly.

Well I guess this is the first story in your Glensford Falls series. Congrats. ;D I like the way it was carried out, but I think you can improve in later stories. The main problem I had with this one was that it was too stereotypical. There was no originality in the characters, dialogue, or plot. With so many horror stories out there, people have this view of something they've probably seen or read a million times before, and it's your job to shake things up and break out of that mold. This is especially difficult to carry out with teen horror stories.

Don't take this as a flamer, because I really did like your idea, I just hope that the other stories will add some new spin to the genre.