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Reviews For: If Only I Could
Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
sm1 went on a writing spree today, lol! cool! i love this, my only suggestion is to use single spacing ;)
Amelia Carr 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
great work! it could use some more punctuation, but is good as is.
WarriorHeart 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
even though the subject saddens me, it was still very well written.
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