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Reviews For: Untitled Once Again
Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
i like this. get a chill down my spine :P
anovelworld 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
ooh... I like... the last line is great. Nice job. :)
Amelia Carr 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
short, but still good! i'd like to suggest 'icy' rather than 'ice' in the first line, but it's all good as is.
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