*snickers evilly* This reminded me of...most of the population of my high school, actually. Buncha vain so-and-so's.

Anywho--I liked the phrasing and the description. You alluded well to what we teenagers well know is hidden beneath the veneer of "angel" that most of our peers wear--conceitedness, immaturity, fear, self-loathing...ah, the list goes on. I look forward to reading more of your stuff in about...ten seconds! ^_^ *flees*

I really like this poem...there's just something about it that makes it so special. I hope you write more soon. ^^