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| Overgrown 2005-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseCould I scoop up someone big enough to play on a court?This story has a very pleasant mood.I must admit I'm imagining some sordid details concerning the CEO card and the elapsed absence. I hope to find out I'm wrong when you update. |
| Stories-have-souls 2005-01-11 ch 1,  | abuseI like your writing style-keeps the reader interested. (Also I will now add you to the author alerts.) |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nice short. Great descriptive words and nice POV as well. The ending was great as well as though a final sense of peace was over the char as comparted to the peace the sunset gave. Nice piece. |